hamish's blog

This is my sexy paragraph it is about why boys are better than girls.

Yellow hat. I did the e and x really good that is important because it is the main part of the writing.

Black hat. I really need to work on my y because it is not very good.

This is my maths. WALT was to add and subtract fractions.

Yellow hat: I learnt how to add fractions and now I am really good at it.

Black hat:Next time I could improve on my subtracting because I am not very good yet.

This is my writing it is about a day at school. We had to write one paragraph informal and another formal paragraph and the paragraphs had to be the same. On the left is my Formal writing and on the right is my Informal writing.

Yellow hat: I wrote my formal writing with out using colloquial words,contractions,first person and clichés.

Black hat: Next time I could improve on writing in a 5 minute peiord and not a whole day.

This is my writing. In class this week we had to write about the holidays. I wrote about the snow. The 1st photo is my planing and the other two are my witing.

Yellow hat : I used bullet points in my planing this is important so then I do not write full sentences in my planing . I used 5 senses in my writing that is important in my writing so it makes it more descriptive.

Black hat : Next time I could improve on putting more adjectives,verbs,adverbs in my writing

This is my flash facts scorers from the last 3 weeks.

And my scorers have been from 10-20

This is a photo my writing. we had to go outside and hang off the bars and then go inside and write about it. 

My work of the week this week is my athletics a Kaponga.

I got 3erd in my 200 meters and I got 4th in my 100 meters.

Next time I want to get a 2end or a 1st.

This is my basic facts  test.I choose this because I got 100 / 100 and I got a time of 4:45 out of 5:00 minutes.

 Next time I want to get 100 / 100 and a better time.

I walked down the main street of town,and was about to walk into a shop.  I heard a weird sound.  I walked in the shop and looked out the window,I saw my brother beating someone up. 

Nervously I throught should Igo and stop him,or walk on and forget about it.  I took one more look and saw that it was a kid from school.  I am still not sure if I should go over and help,because  he could start beating my up like he does at home.  I nervously walked over.  I told him to stop and him yelled go away.  I told him again and he told me to shut up. I say mum want to see you he stares at me and thinks, he says fine then and follows me to mum.

At school the next day the kid thanks me and I felt really good that I did that.

  This is my basic facts test. I choose this because I got a very good score of 83 out of 100